IMPORTANT NOTICE: The following is not kind to
todays liberal mindset. If any have said mindset and wish to remain in their
socio-political cocoon, then go no further.
A Political Dissection of an Emotional but Tragically Blind
Liberal Poem
(author remains un-named here, because this kind of blind sickness is not
unique to the author, it is endemic in our world today)
First, let me thank the author for creating this poem that
gave me the opportunity to again expose such flaws in the popular liberal
mindset,
and to blow off my resultant totally justified steam with a
well thought-out researched but resultantly wildly ranting response here.
Now,
for the full shocking effect, read the liberal poem in its un-dissected form
first:
Sighted
Global warming here as foretold
IGNORED
first of the four horsemen
gallops in from Texas
usurps good will and blind
patriotism
for an insane agenda
terrorists and freedom fighters
defined by their name for God
Holocaust and firestorms
perpetrated in thy name
one love,one love,ONE LOVE
visible to children,mothers,
and too few others
earth herself begins to wobble
wealth and resources
too heavily concentrated
petrochemical giants pour fuel
into coffers of psychotic puppeteers
fields of wheat give way
to another Wal Mart
mother sheds tears of blood,pus
at the sight of what her children
do to her children
raping her forests
gouging away at her flanks
with puke-yellow bulldozers
great snarling beasts patrol
the grid of asphalt squares
that grace her tender skin
enormous buzzing maelstrom
of infected knowledge
zings through the poisoned air
children go hungry as resources
are diverted for more weapons
to kill other children
missiles instead of medicine
demands the mad puppeteer
as well intentioned dupes
wave flags...and cheer
take from the poor
give to the rich
trickle down economics
bathe the have-nots
in the urine of the haves
toxic clouds build over
cement mountain ranges
with smokestack peaks
spewing poison
and infected information
acid rain,fried baby's,melting icecaps,
poisoned rivers,tag-team hurricanes
famine,poverty,illegal love,[because
its not his kind of love] bombs for
Israel,nukes for Korea,rain forests
disappear.All unnoticed
but we never miss a football score
or a madmans speech
blind men march to the tune
of a monster
while the sighted are silenced
some of us had eyes to see
tried to stop it
communes and homesteads
against tyrants and greed
love against lust
we had no chance,the sighted ones
the blind allowed us no voices
even now so few see the demons
breathing fire on mothers tender skin
I envy the blind their absence of sorrow
it is a sad burden
to be sighted
in a blind world
Now as a work
of art it is a great poem
for its emotion and imagry.
After reading it my first impression was, Hey, this is a powerful piece, somewhat naοve,
but powerful!
There are a few grammatical errors, but no matter in art.
The poem is a good
representation of the tragic
mindset of many people who only encounter politics from the fringe, and
only grab bits and pieces from whatever source happens to be near.
It is not as a work of art that I take issue with it here, but with what the imagery is erroneously implying,
the blindness behind it, and the social sickness that gave birth to it.
So the poem gets read, the images are taken in, believed,
and unfortunately most readers stop there and dont put on their critical thinking caps
.
Such is our liberal world.
Where is cynicism when you
need it?
Alas, once again I
must do the work for my emotional and artistically talented and gifted
but fact-finding-avoiding and logical-deduction-lacking liberal friends:
"Dissection
of a Great Liberal Whale"
Poem Issue and Erroneous Image.......
.Corrections- Well
Researched and Thought-Out:
Global warming here as foretold
..First
issue, global warming-
may I politely and
IGNORED.............................................respectfully
point out (as I will throughout, though it may not
..............................................................be apparent
at times!) that this issue is just a
...................media myth- there is no scientific consensus on
this,
................................................................not all
scientists agree on it. There even have been
studies that prove the earth is cooling.
................................................................Some
people believe what they want to believe, and
................................................................the media
prints what it must to create news.
...............................................................The days
of objective journalism is over, if it ever existed.
Though we can't rely on media, Im not for pollution,
................................................................and better to
be on the safe side
................................................................and deal
with the possibility of global warming, but
its a sad comment on the state of
science today that it can be manipulated
politically-
................................................................and theres a
LOT of
BAD SCIENCE today- where people, yes,
a surprise to some of my liberal friends,
scientists are
people, conclude what they think
MIGHT happen rather than finding out
what is ACTUALLY happening. For all we
know there might be some new beneficial
life forms evolving off of all our human
..waste. Anyone looking into that? Heck no!
As for BAD SCIENCE- its like
a liberal chemistry professor
I had who expounded "dont be afraid to
jump to a conclusion- let someone else
disprove it!" Now what kind of a crap
mentality is that? Ill tell you what it is,
its bad
science! That is why we hear
that something is good for us one day
then the next
day that its proven wrong! Liberalism has
destroyed
Science itself! (and my liberal
friends complain about the Religious zealots!)
first of the four horsemen.........................Some
would say we already had two- Carter and Clinton.
gallops in from Texas...............................Obviously
LBJ and his "Great (failed) Society".
usurps good will and blind.......................Our unfortunate
midguided walking liberal zombies
...................................(still love 'em) have
forgotten the two buffoons
Bush ran
...........................................against, Gore and Kerry, and
the joke of a party they represented,
...................the Democratic Party (Al
Sharpton, anybody?),
...............................................................leaving us who
are not affiliated with either Party
..............................................................with any
real choice!
..So much for Bush
usurping anything.
...Oh yea, this brings up Bush stole the 2000 election crap
...............................................................the Loonie
Left has been bellowing this at us for four years-.
When it was Gore and the Democrats who tried
to steal the
...............................................................election,
This is why the NAACP won their election
fraud lawsuit
against the State of Florida, and then that
sue-happy organization has the gall
to turn around and claim this proves Blacks
were disenfranchised
by Republicans. Jeeze!
patriotism
..............................................Oh this is great. Derision
of US patriotism while lauding
..............................................................zealot terrorists
as "freedom fighters"? Where's my
..............................................................."exposed to
hypocricy" barf bag, that is really sickening-
...............................................................but such are my
liberal friends politic grasp on the issues..
for an insane agenda
....A good example
of the effects of liberal hype.
Let me guess what my nebulous friends-
who are casualties of the liberal media
blitz-
................................................................and who do not
give any of these issues
much research or thought for themselves-
.are referring to- the War in Iraq, perhaps?
.(how did I guess?)
................................................................Let's
put this particular issue in terms of our liberal
................................................................friend's own
favorite measuring stick- dead
babies:
................................................................Now,
for my math-challenged liberal friends
................................................................let's talk
simple numbers:
................................................................Liberal sanctions killed 500,000 Iraqi
babies,
................................................................while Bush's insane agenda with
his terrible missiles and bombs
................................................................and blind men march to the
tune of a monster
................................................................and Holocaust and
firestorms
................................................................fighting
freedom
fighters
................................................................(I
think I'm going to be ill again, one moment...)
................................................................with blind patriotism resulted
in about, for the
................................................................Iraq War- 2,000 dead babies,
................................................................most of those
killed by cowardly Saddam supporters
................................................................and militant
Muslims who use them as shields.
................................................................OK, now the
million dollar math question:
...............................................................Which
is more, 500,000 or 2,000 dead babies?
................................................................So which
method should be the last resort?
................................................................Easy for a
rational person to answer,
................................................................hard for my
liberal friends. I even had one friend
................................................................literally cover
his ears and say, "I'm not listening!"
................................................................-and to think
our liberal friends want to go back
.................................................................to the failed
economic sanctions.
................................................................that killed
half a million babies and harmed millions of others
................................................................while being
totally ineffective in its objectives..
................................................................Think of it
this way, three cheers for Bush and his
...............................................................blind men marching to
the tune of a monster
................................................................who saved another half-a-million Iraqi babies from
................................................................slaughter
................................................................Oh, now my
flip-flopping pretend-to-be-concerned
...............................................................Liberal
friends will reformulate their question,
................................................................what the
numbers are in terms of the cost of American lives.
...............................................................OK.
................................................................In almost two
years of fighting mindless militant Muslims
................................................................in Iraq the US
suffered just over 1,000 military
................................................................deaths. Two
years. Soldiers. OK. Now in one day Osama
................................................................and his suicide
buddies attacked two American civilian population
................................................................centers where
almost 100,000 Americans and other
................................................................civilized
people worked in the immediate vicinity. So another math question
................................................................I pose
to my math-challenged liberal friends: which is larger-
................................................................1,000 soldiers trained to fight and
knowing of the risks,
................................................................or 100,000 unsuspecting civilians
killed?
................................................................I
normally give my liberal friends a year or two to count all this
up on their fingers..
I further suppose our misguided friends
think its war for oil?
First may I remind
our liberal casualties of media hype that if
Saddam
stepped down Bush would have never gone
.into Iraq in the first place. So much for
the war for oil argument.
Oh yea, liberals like to say the US doesnt
.get involved in foreign affairs unless
theres oil or some other
.resource involved. Pure crap. Wheres the
oil
.in Haiti when they BEGGED the US forces to
go
.there and restore order? Bosnia? None.
.Somolia? None. Panama? Vietnam? Korea?
.Europe in WWII? WWI? Give me a break
.with this mindless pseudo-political tripe.
terrorists and freedom fighters
..EXCUSE
ME my blind liberal friends-
defined by their name for God
.....the
last time I looked it up terrorists
were
defined by their method of negotiation-
killing unarmed civilians! Let me put it
to our mushed-up liberal friends minds
this way-
if the US used the same methods-
targeting civilians and centers of
civilian populations to get their way-
how many Muslim civilians could the US
kill?
Answer: All of them. So who
would win this war of who
can kill the most civilians? Answer: the
US.
Now for the kicker: Have liberals ask
themselves
why the US- the very country that theyve
been programmed
.to hate- doesnt stoop to such methods?
Why
doesnt the US kill civilians to get their way
then
be called freedom fighters by our liberal friends (yea, likely)
like they call the terrorists; our
liberal friends
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terrorists to the point of insanity while
bashing the US.
Holocaust and firestorms
perpetrated in thy name
.Unfortunately I know our misguided
.liberal friends have aimed this at Bush and his
.I think God wants all people to be free statement
..rather than the radical Muslims who
..have a much less noble aim- which
includes eradicating all liberals!
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one love,one love,ONE LOVE
visible to children,mothers,
and too few others
.This is the
first thing that makes sense.
One reason- its not a part of the
political arena that our liberal friends
are
severely.lacking in facts in. Another
reason- -
men for some reason are not as tuned
in to love as women and children.
Unfortunate indeed,
but it harkens back to primal instinct.
earth herself begins to wobble
wealth and resources
too heavily concentrated
.Oh this is rich! We all know
our liberal friends
..are talking about a large percentage of
..the worlds wealth being in the US.
.Well my blind self-avowedly-sighted
friends,
.How do you think it got there?
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.Maybe it has something to do with the
.culture of work and enterprise, and
with Christian values you so quickly
.trash and so blindly bash! More news:
.the rest of the world is following the
same path,
.they are just behind.
petrochemical giants pour fuel
into coffers of psychotic puppeteers
..Obviously this is referring
to
..the liberal Hollywood actors bending
.the weak minds of our liberal friends
.while flying around in their Hollywood
fuel-guzzling
.private jets, and while their
.cocaine
is flown to them in equally
.fuel-guzzling aircraft from tyrant
states. It couldnt
possibly be referring to some imaginary dark Marxist-villianized
greedy industrialist
from the 1870s that liberals still
imagine exists here in the US.
fields of wheat give way
to another Wal Mart
..I dont know
about yours, but my
..Walmart was built on a zoned-lot that was
completely trashed by my liberally
littering friends. It looks much better
now.
mother sheds tears of blood,pus
at the sight of what her children
do to her children
raping her forests
gouging away at her flanks
with puke-yellow bulldozers
great snarling beasts patrol
the grid of asphalt squares
that grace her tender skin
enormous buzzing maelstrom
.Typical
of our misguided liberal friends, bashing that
........................................which they themselves benefit
from. How about going back
........................................and living in a hovel with no running water,
........................................with pestilence and disease
(talk about the four horsemen)
............................................my hypocritical liberal
friends?
of infected knowledge
.................Sounds like our liberal
education system.
zings through the poisoned air
.OK, a
back-to-nature freak, hmm?
..Ill tell you what, my job takes me
..out into nature, and, another
..surprise, my overly-insulated liberal
..friend- its dog-eat-dog out there.
..They would much prefer being taken
care of.
..You want nature? Come on over
..and Ill share with you some of my
..flies, mosquitoes, wasps, spiders,
..mice, snakes, ants, and ladybugs
..(yes, ladybugs- those tiny cute
..icons of a girls book cover- in
..sufficiently large numbers they
..are a pestilence!)
..(When one of the
..four horsemen do arrive,
..namely Pestilence, hes going
..to let loose ladybugs by the
billions!)
..(they have a nutty smell when
..gathered in sufficiently large
numbers.)
children go hungry as resources
are diverted for more weapons
First of all the US gives more aid
to kill other children
to the rest of the world than the entire
missiles instead of medicine
GNPs of all the tightwad
decaying socialist Euro-liberal countries
.our liberal friends idolize combined!
.So well scratch that off the fair
and balanced list.
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.Third, its a sad fact but its lucky for our lib
friends
.the US remains militarily strong,
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.and be speaking one of three
languages today- Hitlers German,
.Imperial Japanese, or Stalinist
Russian. (they forget that when Hitler made
.his move the US military was
practicing with broomsticks for guns
.and Model-T Fords for tanks, which
Hitler knew about,
.and which emboldened him. Hey, sounds familiar- terrorists,
.US
backing down, emboldened
funny how history repeats itself, but
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.For more recent pick of a lauguage
our libs would be talking, pick from any of the tin-pot dictators
.Who have delusions of world
domination, but are checked by, well what do you know, the USA!.
demands the mad puppeteer
.from this
poem it looks like our liberal friends strings are the ones being pulled,
..and the mad puppeteer is our blind
liberal culture.
as well intentioned dupes
wave flags...and cheer
..more US-ophobes, success-ophobes, work-ophobia,
religion-ophobia, fact-ophobes,
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take from the poor
give to the rich...............................................................Typical
liberal mindset living in the medieval European past-
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trickle down economics
bathe the have-nots
in the urine of the haves
..First, Reagans trickle down economics worked, my duped
.liberal friend. Every 5% segment of
the income range
.benefited, from the richest to the
poorest. How about
.our liberal friends doing a little
independent research next time
.rather than listening to their blind
liberal buddies?
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toxic clouds build over
cement mountain ranges
with smokestack peaks
spewing poison
.another illusion of a bygone day in
America.
..Such pollution still exists in
the third world and Russia, yes,
..countries our naive liberal friends'
hearts prefer over the US, but the US
..is the cleanest industrialized nation on the planet.
and infected information
..Lets
see- lets assume this refers to false company
.reports and government cover-ups of
harmful
.enterprises. Where our liberal
friends go awry here is
.thinking its the rule rather than the exception.
acid rain,fried baby's,melting icecaps,
poisoned rivers,tag-team hurricanes
..more chicken-little bad science jumped on by the
agendad liberal media-
........................................................there are an
equal number of scientists that argue hurricanes
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would be milder in
a warmer earth
famine,poverty,illegal love,
[becauseits not his kind of love] bombs for
Israel,nukes for Korea,rain forests
disappear.All unnoticed
..you mean you are revealing it to
us here for the
first time? Hardly. I personally am
inundated with it daily
by our skewed liberal culture.
but we never miss a football score
or a madmans speech
..Nice alluding to how Americans are
more concerned
.about their trivial lives than the
plight of the world.
.Come on! Why should you single out
Americans!???
.Ill tell you what people in the
third world care about,
.and it isn't a distant rain
forest half-way around the world!
.Thats a burden
the US has taken on.
blind men march to the tune
of a monster
.sounds like my liberal friends marching
to the tune of the liberal
..media blitz. We know our misguided
liberal friends were
..trying to paint a picture of the
military under Bush.
..OK, my misguided liberal friends, you want to see a monster?
..Ive got a few for you, and you
can start with the dictators of your romantic communist states
..that you are so blindly enamored
with.
while the sighted are silenced
Sounds
like the Democratic Party trying to silence
..conservative outlets, or more
often, their own dissenters. We know our misguided liberals
...meant the opposite.
some of us had eyes to see
tried to stop it
but
unfortunately liberal logic is cracked and lacking.
communes and homesteads
against tyrants and greed
..We know our uneducated liberal
friends have a
..blind romantic view of communism.
..How unfortunate it is that they
dont realize
..communism has been tried many
times
..and each time it ended up with
the same failed results- tyranny,
..mass murder, economic depression,
over-militarization, ignorance,
..brainwashing, poverty, mass
starvation, foreign aggression- all the things our liberal friends-
..who live in dark liberal boxes
while proclaiming themselves sighted-
..fail to see, and who erroneously
..and in complete fantasy associate
with the USA.
..As an American, Ive never waved
its flag before,
..but maybe its about time I stand
up for the US
..against such blind hate.
love against lust
.love- is conservative, lust- is liberal, yet our
mixed-up friends
..spend their time defending the
latter. If I didnt understand
..the cause of their plight
..Id be completely discombobulated
at this point.
we had no chance,the sighted ones
the blind allowed us no voices
..Sounds like a typical
liberal organization, starting with
the Democratic Partys tyranny
wing, and ending with our public education system.
even now so few see the demons
breathing fire on mothers tender skin
.Poetic, but
unfortunately we know our liberal friends
.point their naive poetic fingers
wrongly at the US
.instead of where they truly
should be pointing at- the foreign tyrannies
which to this day beget untold human
miseries that the US has to go and alleviate.
I envy the blind their absence of sorrow
it is a sad burden
to be sighted
in a blind world
.and,
if this weren't a piece of fiction, I'd say
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..Maybe this response will truly
pry open, if only for a moment,
..a few of my liberal friends
sleeping eyes.
.with love and peace, wbiro
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